Twist, Railee Raine

[Railee Raine Twist]

CASE FILE: Twist, Railee
AGE :: seventeen
GENDER ::FEMALE
D.O.B. :: December 5th 2095
STATUS :: Imperfection
OCCUPATION :: High school student.

PHYSICAL APPEARANCE

HEIGHT ::5'3
WEIGHT :: 115
HAIR COLOR :: Dark brown with blue streaks
EYE COLOR :: dark brown
BIRTHMARKS :: mole on her leg
TATTOOS AND/OR PIERCINGS :: earrings and belly button piercing
GENETIC MODEL :: Madison Harris

PERSONALITY

LIKES :: Writing lyrics,Her sister, dancing, reading, and her life
DISLIKES :: the gov't,school,step-parent, step-sister,reapers
PET PEEVE(S) :: her step-sister stealing her clothing
GREATEST FEAR :: dying
HABITS :: chewing nails, looking at feet when lying, looking at nails when nervous
FLAWS :: attitude-bratty,self-absorbed,pushes people away,stand offish,judges people
POSITIVE ATTRIBUTES ::Is nice to those she knows,she is rather lovable after a while, cuddly, wants to love someone, believes in faith.

FAMILY

MOTHER :: Elena Twist, 23 (would've been 45), school teacher (dead)
FATHER :: Riley Twist, 47, Government worker
BROTHER(S) :: none
SISTER(S) :: Kaya Dawn Twist,14,school student
STEP-RELATION(S) :: Krystal Anne Halfway(step sister) 10, Jamie Halfway-Twist(stepmother) 34, school teacher
HALF-SIBLING(S) :: James Halfway-Twist 4

HISTORY

FACT ONE :: oRailee was born on a cold dark winters night to a teenager who didn't want a baby, so she gave them to a couple who wanted a daughter more than anything. But she doesn't know this.
FACT TWO :: Railee was taken home the night she was born, in fact the birth was done secretly, not secret enough though because the government knew of her birth.
FACT THREE ::Railee's name, being as unique as it is, means she who conquers fear. Her parents named her this because when she was born she stared them right in there eyes without so much as a cry.
FACT FOUR :: Railee's adopted mother died suddenly when she was just three years old, she didn't know what to do, and she had a younger sister because of it.
FACT FIVE :: Railee's adopted father remarried, scarring Railee for life as things started to change, and she started to become more hard core.
FACT SIX :: Railee fell deep into love with one of her tutors at her home school, but she didn't tell anyone, she couldn't,and she didn't tell anyone her secret.
FACT SEVEN ::Railee found out one day that she wasn't a normal child. She wasn't like the rest of the children on her street, she found herself out of the school many times with little colds and what nots. One day, she was attacked by a Reaper and she ran away, scared and lonely.

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hey, my name's Madi, but you may know me as Railee Raine Twist. I've been out and about for 7 years, and I found you guys through umm robin linked me durrrTEAM ADMIN OWNS YOUR FACE.

[AFRICAN MAMMAL ©]

You got the format of the application right, but as I told you, there are some anachronisms. Here's what you need to fix:

• There's no way The Government wouldn't know of Railee's birth. Homes are bugged and the main streets are kept under constant video surveillance, so you need to remove that bit.
• Youths are home schooled. There's no formal schooling, so your last two facts need to be changed.
• If she's an Imperfection for the colds, like you said, she should have been attacked by a Reaper in her past. Imperfections are the ones that escaped Repear attacks.

Also, the rules password should be in one of your history facts, but I'll let it slide, 'cause you know it, so you obviously read the rules. (=

[AFRICAN MAMMAL ©]

All right Madi! We made it through the application process! Thanks for fixing Railee's history. Now it's nice and legit. Railee can buddy up with Karlee, if you'd like. Go ahead and claim your face, then get to plotting! Oh, and don't forget to contact me or Robin with questions/comments/concerns/etc. (=